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This month’s workout, “Commas with Quotations and Questions,” is taken from CMOS 17, paragraphs 6.40–42. Advanced editors might tackle the questions cold; learners can study that section of the Manual before answering the questions.
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Note: Dictionaries and style guides sometimes disagree. These questions are designed to test knowledge of The Chicago Manual of Style, which prefers Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary, 11th edition. Other style guides may follow a different dictionary.
[Editor’s note: This quiz relies on and links to the 17th edition of CMOS.]
Chicago Style Workout 24: Commas with Quotations and Questions
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I agree that number 5 could include commas (given that Sid wrote only one article), but why would it be incorrect to omit them?
How enjoyable! (And I only missed one-half of the “trick” pair, roiled by the surely-intended self doubt.)
I love you, CMOS, and I will defend your comma usages to the death.
I’m confused about comma use in dialog in fiction. In the phrase Another man was told, “Confess!” by the police, is the comma needed after “told”? What about: She wanted to say, “I love you” but she was afraid of his response.
Authors often use commas before any quoted (dialog) text, but it doesn’t seem correct.
Excellent question! So many readers asked this question that we decided to address it in the new edition of CMOS. Paragraph (13.15) (“No Comma to Introduce a Quotation”) says, “Many writers mistakenly use a comma to introduce any direct quotation, regardless of its relationship to the surrounding text. But when a quotation introduced midsentence forms a syntactical part of the surrounding sentence, no comma or other mark of punctuation is needed to introduce it, though punctuation may be required for other reasons.” See section 13.15 for examples.