Chicago Style Workout 1:
Series and the Serial Comma

IMG_20150818_160326_881What’s your Chicago style fitness level?

Does your résumé claim that you are familiar with The Chicago Manual of Style? If a potential employer decided to test you on that claim, would you come out looking strong—or would you be left dangling halfway up the rope?

Today we’re launching a new monthly feature at Shop Talk that will give you regular opportunities to evaluate the strength of your knowledge of Chicago style. If you’re a beginner, exercise with us! Build some editorial muscle.

Each Chicago style workout focuses on a small part of CMOS. Advanced editors might tackle the exercises cold; learners can study the related sections of the Manual ahead of time.

One important caveat: the workouts are all about Chicago! If you’re an expert in MLA, AP, or New York Times style, you might be surprised to find that your instincts don’t quite match Chicago’s. That doesn’t mean that your answer is necessarily “wrong”—it just means it isn’t Chicago style.

Today’s workout zeroes in on the section of the Manual called “Series and the Serial Comma,” specifically sections 6.18–6.21 (16th edition). (Subscribers to The Chicago Manual of Style Online may click through to the linked sections of the Manual. For a 30-day free trial of CMOS Online, click here.)

[Editor’s update: These styles did not change in the 17th edition, although their section numbers may have changed.]

Ready? Go!

Chicago Style Workout 1: Series and the Serial Comma (CMOS 6.18–6.21)

Note: These questions are designed to test knowledge of The Chicago Manual of Style. Other style guides may have different rules and guidelines. The first five items are true/false statements, and the last five ask you to judge whether the example does or does not follow Chicago style.

1. When a conjunction joins the last two elements in a series of three or more, a comma (known as the serial or series comma or the Oxford comma) should appear before the conjunction.
a.  
b.  
2. In a series whose elements are all joined by conjunctions, no commas are needed unless the elements are long and delimiters would be helpful.
a.  
b.  
3. When an ampersand (&) is used instead of the word and (as in company names), the serial comma is omitted.
a.  
b.  
4. When elements in a series include internal punctuation, or when they are very long and complex, they may need to be separated by semicolons rather than by commas.
a.  
b.  
5. The phrase as well as is equivalent to and.
a.  
b.  
6. On Twitter, she follows her school librarians, Taylor Swift and Lady Gaga.
a.  
b.  
7. Jeremy and Loretta gave $12.50 toward the $100 gift; Aisha, in a rare show of generosity, gave $67.55; Stuart found $4.00 in his sofa cushions; and Denys made up the difference with a contribution of $15.95.
a.  
b.  
8. This chapter offers tips on kitchen organization; an overview of equipment, measures, and cookbooks; and ways to achieve perfect jams and jellies.
a.  
b.  
9. Do you have class on Monday, or Wednesday, or Friday?
a.  
b.  
10. The dog growled, the cat meowled, and the boy just chewed on a straw.
a.  
b.  

 

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54 thoughts on “Chicago Style Workout 1:
Series and the Serial Comma

  1. Could someone please tell what dictionary the word meowled is listed in? Fun quiz. I’m going to be using these with my copyediting team at work.

    • Could it be a combination of the words(sounds) meowed and howled? The quiz is definitely a useful tool. Thanks for sharing.

  2. i find mistakes for fun.i assumed i was a proofreader but so far,i’ve only missed one answer on two workouts! chicago style so far seems to mirror a catholic school education. i always assumed copy editing,and you did indeed warn about other styles,had a whole new set of rules to learn.i realize it was only commas and probably beginners luck but still fun. i admire your site,your city,and your profession. and yes,i’ve invented my own rules for commenting.it’s just not equivalent to anything but what it is.so, i am civil always but i capitilize,never.

  3. I loved this, too! I was surprised I didn’t get 100 percent on what I consider one of the easier rules to remember. I”m going to hit the books. Please keep them coming!

  4. When I submitted my answers, I got the message “Error Occured:error Forbidden.” I don’t think the message is Chicago style. Also, I’m sad that I can’t get my score.

    • Connie, we’re sorry for the hitch! Did you remember to fill out the “Captcha” before clicking Submit? We just tested the quiz, and it worked fine at this end.

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  6. Oh, no! It never crossed my mind that Taylor Swift and Lady Gaga were not librarians. I need help that the Chicago Manual of Style can’t provide!

    • I totally did the same thing as Sandra–because the serial comma wasn’t there (and because I achieved the feat of forgetting that the whole point of the quiz was to assess the serial comma), as I read the sentence I automatically assumed that in its world T-Swift and Lady Gaga were the speaker’s school librarians. “Sounds right to me!”

      Shows the power of the serial comma’s absence…

  7. The problem with question 9 is that if commas are not used the answer could be either a day of the week or “yes.”

      • That problem exists with any question with an ‘or’ serial. It’s how ‘or’ works logically; “yes” will be a logically correct answer if you have class on at least one of those days. In conversation, however, that answer alone might be blatantly unhelpful.

  8. In 9 the meaning is indeterminate. The provision at 6.18 does not distinguish two quite different motivations. Here I apply different punctuation:

    A. Do you have class on Monday or Wednesday or Friday? The bookshop is open just those three mornings, so you could pick up your special order before class.
    B. Do you have class on Monday, or Wednesday, or Friday? Tell my assistant so he can settle when we should meet for lunch.

    Compare two ways of understanding the relevant example at 6.18 (and I add commas in B):

    A. Would you prefer Mendelssohn or Schumann or Liszt? That would give some variety; but if you insist on Beethoven, can we at least avoid the Pathétique?
    B. Would you prefer Mendelssohn, or Schumann, or Liszt? We must choose only one piece, remember.

    All this assumes that the wording itself is fixed (in a transcript of speech, say).

    Are we seriously to believe that the B cases but without commas are well-considered Chicago style? Another hypothesis: the distinction was not considered, in framing 6.18.

  9. Rats! I momentarily forgot we were doing commas. I marked No. 7 “not Chicago style” because of the “.00” after the $4 — ah, well …

    • Like you, I lost points on No. 7, not because of the $4.00 but because of the $100, which I thought should have been $100.00 according to 9.21: “Whole amounts expressed numerically should include zeros and a decimal point only when they appear in the same context with fractional amounts.” But I guess you’re right: we were “doing commas.”

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